My second attempt and the one i think im gunna do for the poem i have to do.. comments suggestions etc. Theme is vision.

Four bedrooms, four bathrooms.
Two boys, three girls
One mom, one dad.
Two families.

A pool in the backyard.
A dog in his house.
Cars in the drive.
Money in the bank

A perfect little family, we appear to be.
Has anyone bothered to ask if this is my reality?