
Ok so im basically a writing freak, im writing the cliche gay story but i need help ita taken me a year and im still stuck so far i have..........
Thanks for your comments.
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*keels over* whooo....wow. first draft for Hear Me Project....constructive criticism is muchly needed....
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"Make a wish baby, make a wish on the shooting star."

so...i haven't written anything worthwhile since the beginning of august. and then i wrote this just now.....
so yeah, tell me what you think....
for the record, this is fiction, though you're probably smart enough to figure it out, but yeah.....didn't happen.
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"I see your taste in fashion hasn't changed."

okay, I was in the shower and i just suddenly had this phrase in mind, so i wrote this little tidbit of a story around it. not really connected to anything, just an image i had. i might go with it, i might not....i dunno yet.
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I smiled, the desperation slithering through my bicuspids like muck and nuclear waste, filling my face with that stomach-turning expression of need, "Come to prom with me," I tried to keep the pleading to a minimum, "it'll be fun, I swear. It won't even be a date, just the two of us, coming as friends?"
A Crafted Masterpiece
07-05-07
“Splendid!” cheered Carter in abrupt and excited approval.
That evening for the first time in his life, as he caressed the slender figure of her body, he felt at one with her. Yes, this is the one he is searching for. Time seemed to cease except for the black and white television that played faintly in the background.
Sweet Little Lamb
03-05-07
The shock was still ricocheting inside my head when I opened my eyes. Where am I? A beeping sound echoed steadily within the white interiors of the room.

this is what happens when you give me too much caffeine and a head full of thoughts about a pretty girl. this is honestly not about anyone in particular, i'm just bored and need to go to bed.
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i'm sitting here in my room.
it feels like the tears are still flowing.
that my face is still sticky with my eyes' precipitation.

“One more minute of this and I’m gonna explode!” I thought as I sat in the counselor office at my prestigious, community college. They weren’t accepting any appointments, and I needed to see a counselor, therefore my only option was to wait endlessly. It had been three hours of worthless waiting.

I think I'll call this one: The Dog that Brought Monogamy
By: The Armadillo at Oasismag.com
Note: I wrote this one just a few minutes ago and I didn't really evaluate it yet. Just bare with me here and enjoy if you want. I'll keep writing if I get positive feedback, or if I get bored. Whichever comes first.
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Intro:

Okay, so after having writers block for a week or so here is chapter two (chapter 1 is here: http://www.oasismag.com/2006/12/expectations-chapter-1-new-story ) I completely changed the plot so now my plot is based on what I want the characters to do at the moment I write it, which is bad, but I like it. Thanks to the people who gave me advice before, hopefully I used it in this chapter.

hey...well i stumbled onto a site called fictionpress.com and it's really neat, they have poems and stories....really cool. i just finished reading a story called "Why I Don't Like Math" and it was good...well i thought it was good haha. so yeah just wanted ta let ya guys in on the site and go check it out...pretty neat.

it's amazing how now anyone can look back and say that "that's what started it all" lol. or something like that...for myself idk ask anyone that knew before i came out. they would've said that they'd imagine me marrying a guy and have the whole "2 or 3 kids and a house with a white picket fence" haha well maybe not that...but you know what i mean.