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22 March, 2012 - 4:20am — angel syndrome

Honeycomb sweetness dripping from bee-stung lips ; the sensuality of your proximity ; your finger in my mouth ; cider-built rêveries.

Your oneness, all-encompassing
My self, imaginary.

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22 March, 2012 - 4:23am — angel syndrome
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further, a question :

when you use your hand do you touch me, the boy, or me, the infirmity?

22 March, 2012 - 10:24am — elph
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After repeated readings...

...a slight change in punctuation would greatly facilitate comprehension: "...touch me, the boy --- or me, the infirmity?"

Now... I understand! :)

22 March, 2012 - 7:29pm — angel syndrome
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thank you! I struggle so

thank you! I struggle so much with punctuation...

22 March, 2012 - 8:11pm — elph
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As do I, as well!

I use punctuation very idiosyncratically... largely to control flow of speech and to enhance intelligibility (this latter consideration is all the more important if I don't really have anything intelligent to say). :)