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30 December, 2010 - 10:57pm — Meldiseus

Well I think this poem is preity good. What do you think of it?

My thong was to tight
My bra was now loose
Here comes my man
What a Caboose

Down at the dinner
No other ties
No others to bother
Just me in his eyes

Then drove me home
Away we sped
The door had to open
We faced father with dred

Many a night
While tucked up in bed
I think of the love
We shared not in bed

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8 January, 2011 - 5:40am — Meldiseus
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Oh my goddess. I just

Oh my goddess.
I just realized how akward this poem is.
He he he sorry every one if I weirded you out just an inspirationn of the moment kind of thing.
(*^_^*)
bye


Hopelessly optimistic, yes, that just might be me

9 January, 2011 - 12:18am — lonewolf678
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well,

i must admit it has it's merits, which make it all the more original. :)

9 January, 2011 - 1:47am — Meldiseus
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Well when I look back over

Well when I look back over at moment what I see is a poem that is increbibly crude yet very entertaining poem.
(*^_^*) bye


Hopelessly optimistic, yes, that just might be me