Flagellation- A Poem

23 November, 2009 - 5:03am — Tophat

Free will

No Thrill

Since when did I care?

Beat me

I'm free

The pain feels so good.

I want

your lash

make me scream and cry.

make me

your slave

c'mon and make me die.

Hurt me,

crush me,

burn me with your cigarette,

fuck me,

bite me,

make me be your little pet.

I am

waiting,

for your lovely knives.

Cut me,

slash me,

I give you my tithes.

lemons,

leather,

tie me to the chair.

beat me,

mercy,

Damn, it's only fair.

Until,

at least,

tonight ends again.

And I

Get up,

and whip you, my friend.

But till,

morning,

I will be your slave,

then we,

shall switch,

and you'll be my babe.

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23 November, 2009 - 5:20am — cherrylover

OMG

AMAZING

23 November, 2009 - 5:22am — Tophat

Thanks.

I appreciate positive feedback!

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Those who are united in love know no separation.
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23 November, 2009 - 5:26am — cherrylover

ur poems always have such

ur poems always have such strong effect on lifes
u trully have a gift with words

23 November, 2009 - 5:28am — Tophat

Flattery...

Will get you everywhere.

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Those who are united in love know no separation.
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23 November, 2009 - 5:32am — cherrylover

YES...

yes those with great words can get in a lot of places

thats why u should keep writting and writing and writing

23 November, 2009 - 5:36am — Tophat

No,

I mean that you're flattering me. :P

If you like a poem about masochism that much, you're a bit odd, darling.

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Those who are united in love know no separation.
-Meher Baba

23 November, 2009 - 5:38am — cherrylover

darling

its fun flattering u

darling if u havent noticed im very odd
thats what makes me, m e
plus being odd is soo much fun

23 November, 2009 - 6:09am — Nanook

Totally thought that you

Totally thought that you made a verb out of "flagella" and I was all like... Oh sex poem?

Apparently not haha. Good poem none the less

23 November, 2009 - 6:31am — Tophat

Um...

It is a sex poem, Nanook. :P

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Those who are united in love know no separation.
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23 November, 2009 - 6:37am — jeff

Heh...

That's why he's confused.

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23 November, 2009 - 4:45pm — Nanook

I meant sex as in little

I meant sex as in little spermies "flagellin'" up canals with their flagellum. Not masochism haha.

Got anothe captcha...

23 November, 2009 - 1:49pm — Tophat

Clearing it up...

flagellation flag·el·la·tion (flāj'ə-lā'shən)
n.

Whipping oneself or another as a means of arousing or heightening sexual feeling.

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Those who are united in love know no separation.
-Meher Baba

23 November, 2009 - 9:41pm — cherrylover

ooooooooo

ooooo
hahahaha
now i get it

24 November, 2009 - 12:04am — Fiona Rosge

hm masocism....masocistic/sadist fights changed my life....weird stuff. Great poem. Sad....love it
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Come Josephine in my flying machine
Going up she goes up she goes
Balance yourself like a bird on a beam
In the air she goes there she goes
Up, up, a little bit higher
Oh, my, the moon is on fire
Good-by

24 November, 2009 - 1:23am — Tophat

I'm glad you like it...

Nobody seemed to have realized the significance of it. Hm. Well, I think you get it anyways, so as long as it reaches someone...

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Those who are united in love know no separation.
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