Amo Te
amo te
te amo
you're beautiful
i whisper
i touch the screen
touch your face
facsimile thereof
but i touch you
with my mind
my heart
my soul
please love me
days pass by
in a green-blue haze
running this way
and that
stand still
listen
i swear
i can hear
your heartbeat
i'm afraid
i'm sure
i'm not
i am
i love
i can't
i will
i'm scared
hold me
let me
hold you
i'd let you
in
if only
you knew
if only
i didn't
fear
i will
i know
i long
for you
you
and
only
you
are the
one
i
love you
you
love me
what else
is there
to say?
BD
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aww :) I love you my Germy.
aww :)
I love you my Germy.
:-)
Such a sweet poem (for such a sweet pair).
~~~ the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses ~ e e cummings ~~~
Hmm...
Doesn't rhyme.
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"People who are happy are slugs... They do not move the human race forward."
-- Camille Paglia, on Oasis
lol. thought the same thing.
lol. thought the same thing. most of my other thoughts were: "ooh, how sweet!" and "my foot hurts" and "tappy sound!!! where!?!" (probably cuz i forgot to take my meds for the 2nd day in a row >.<)
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Cluny: "[mocking tone] Oh my! Are you scared?"
Cornflower: "Yes... but I'll get over it. *You* are ugly, and there's no cure for that."
-Redwall
Not really, but there's more
Not really, but there's more to the art of poetry than a rhyme. I admire those with the ability to put their thoughts and emotions down in a way that shows some semblance of the true intent. I love complete openness, with all vulnerability exposed. Good luck you two!
Hmm...
OK, but when you read:
"i
love you
you
love me"
Anyone who's ever seen Barney knows you can EASILY make that rhyme.
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"People who are happy are slugs... They do not move the human race forward."
-- Camille Paglia, on Oasis
you know jeff, there are
you know jeff, there are people who can help you with these suicidal tendencies. :P
and, while i'm certian you already know this, but the point wasn't to rhyme. if it was, i wouldn't have written it.
what is it with people who insist that poetry must rhyme?? they're idiots.
Bulldyke
to see a world in a grain of sand
and a heaven in a wild flower
hold infinity in the palm of your hand
and eternity in an hour
~William Blake