We're at war.. we live like this

davidmassey2006's picture

Something I wrote

We stand
lifting our hands
for rights
so far away
no one can see them yet
i run away
scared at night
because who i am
who i decide not to hide
is there open
ready for the attack
ready to die
ready to bring light on the cause
ready
but tired
can't sleep
running away
from who i thought you would be
seems family isn't what it is cracked up to be
but i wish so
there is a hate
for a large group of the population
but guess what
we stand up
we show pride
we hold hands
we know love
we know freedom
we know revolt
we know compassion
we know whats next
so dear people of closed minds
open them
the future is coming
a future bright
a future so beautiful
and remember
**we are, we know, we will fight*

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gaynow's picture

I really liked this ^^ very

I really liked this ^^ very nice with the repeated "we know" section. Could do with some more punctuation, IMO, but it's your call on that one. Good job, though.

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