HERE IS A POEM I WROTE =)

Alyssa in love's picture

as our tongues start to intertwine
all i could think is finally she is mine

my heart races at her every touch
my imagination gets to be to much

I waited so long for her to love me the same
my love for her i could never tame

the feel of her skin so tender and sweet
a prettier girl i couldn't possibly meet

I love when our bodies are close together
with her beside me, i could lay there forever

my skin burns under her fingertips
when i close my eyes all i can picture is her lips

she is everything i could have ever asked for
whenever i get a taste of her i always want more

she is my life, my love, and my bestfriend
and i plan to stay with her until the very end

That was my poem i hope u liked it =) tell me what you thought!lol

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flatbreadass's picture

AnM i like it...makes me

AnM
i like it...makes me wonder if i could ever feel that way. bc sadly i have never had such feelings. of course i could lie and write like that but it just wouldnt be true

loreonpravus's picture

Ahh. I want a girl I can

Ahh. I want a girl I can feel that way towards.

Naimah's picture

this peom is good. really

this peom is good. really cute. its like mcdonalds and im lovin it. lol

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Naimah!!!!!!

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Neutrina's picture

So cute! I really like how

So cute!
I really like how you managed to rhyme it without it being cheesy. Very well done.

"She's a mystery
She's too much for me
But I keep coming back for more
She's just the girl I'm looking for"
-The Click Five "Just the Girl"

-Ruby-'s picture

Holla!

Your poem makes me hungry for girl.

underage_thinker's picture

Fuck yeah it's choking on

Fuck yeah

it's choking on your beliefs; it's your worst sin saving your fucking life
it's the devil's knife carving holes into you soul so angels will have a place to make their way inside
life doesn't rhyme
-Andrea Gibson