
1. To nothing and back
Nothing breathes here, where ice slides off
and disappears. The navy sky does not sing; it is full
of unfocused nothing—the air, weak from only carrying the sound
of ice losing itself while Erosion our mother
hurries everything to its future self.
Nothing is so heavy; ice only knows to shatter itself
and float in pieces under the sag of the blue sky,
God’s blue head facing away,
away.
2. Toy gun
See how the littlest one holds it, points it at his sister’s head as she thinks about her markers, her advertisement to the world. Quiero ser la policia. She raises the sign for her mother’s camera and waits for its bright blink, the settling of everything into the long stillness of a photograph.
Her brother has fired and fired; he is laughing. His sister says the policia never laugh with their guns out. And here the two children play, and there, not five miles south their father rolls around in the dirt reaching for knives and necks and life.
3. A gray shrub in a field of rye
waits
for anything; proof
of existence
or to under-
stand why
the tiny lips
of its roots
suck the earth
alone.
Comments
Awesome, no kidding. I love
Awesome, no kidding. I love your style. Well done.
I like the first one especially.
I love the second one
IT'S SOOOOOOOOO GOOD! The other two sound really pretty, but try to tell a story in your poetry, like you did in the toy guns one. I don't know if this goes for everyone but I like poetry best when it tells a story instead of just describing something. Maybe they told a story and I just didn't catch on because I'm kinda slow when it comes to poetry. If they do have a story then they're all incredible. Are you thinking of becoming a writer? You should, they're really good.
"gay: cheerful and lighthearted; merry." - The American Heritage Dictionary.
not really.
being a writer would be so trying, and just holding the dream of professional writing in your head makes life unstable and the future hazy. i'm going into science, either to be a microbiologist or a psychiatrist.
thanks for the nice words though. approval always validates things.