help? :)
So I'm attempting to get into a seven day camp for youth writers during the summer, and I need to submit a short piece of either poetry or prose. I've narrowed it down to two, but I can't decide which to send. Could you super helpful people take a look at them, and tell me which one you think would be better? They're short, so it won't take long.
poem
prose
Thanks in advance!
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Ay, the link to the prose
Ay, the link to the prose piece led me to a Page Not Found thing, so I'll go with the poem, I suppose. Heh. :P
Yeah, the prose link doesn't
Yeah, the prose link doesn't work. But the poem was excellent, so I don't think you could go wrong with that one. Good luck.
now i want to read it...
ok...the prose, it started out with this confused pathway leading to a discovery of mistakes in ones recent life. the character http 404 intrigued me though.
just joshing you, the poem was good, but i wanna read the prose now... I CAMMAND THEE! (sarcastic voice)
The poem was very nice, and
The poem was very nice, and I don't see any reason why you shouldn't submit it.
But, I agree with Evil, I would like to know more about this http 404 character--he sounds like a riot.
As for your link to the prose piece, the reason it doesn't work is because it's a link to the fanfiction.net site and those links never seem to work.