I think i know why book been slowing down. my houseguest, while really cool and nice, is super distracting. I can't focus on my story whil i'm around him. Plus, I am writing in side characters, who i don't really know that well. Ghosba is my passionate and confident side, Aido (formerly Yanzo) is my brother/Hattori Hanzo.
The new character, Aseore, is what i see myself as, if I had followed in the footsteps of my brothers in trying to impress my father. He is that part of me that always wanted dad's approval, except fully manifested. I don't really know him that well, as I haven't really listened to him (i did early in life, but after that, i threw him to the wayside). But he is still interesting to me, like someone I've never really got to know. He isn't saying much to me, but that's probably because we haven't talked in a long time. I need to meditate and speak to him in depth.
Ghosba is such a cool character, because he has a good, kind heart, but his past is so twisted and tragic that he has built this violent, vengeful shell around himself. Kano, who I can't WAIT to write about, will try to break that shell, leading to unlikely romance. YEAH!
Just a question, is it bad form if I skip a chunk and get to the part I really wanna write about? Or should I stick it out, let the story write itself, so when I go back and change things, which I'm already starting to do, i don't have to revamp an entire plotline? Grrrr.
Stuck on the antagonist, Lady Ugatha. I don't want to be boring and make her like 1960's villain with no substance. I want readers to understand her. But She is the type of person who commits evil to further her own ends, and she enjoys it. That is so far out of my realm of understanding, I don't know where to draw inspirations from. Any suggestions would be useful.
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I Suggest Modifying Your Goals a Bit
While every writer writes in their own way, I'd say the idea of doing "the good bits" first is generally a bad idea. I mean, think about it - if there are parts of your book that aren't interesting enough even for you, the author, to want to write them, what makes you think that anyone else is going to be interested in reading them? To me, that temptation to just "skip all that junk and get to the good stuff" is a sign that you're probably not quite ready to tackle a full-length novel yet. That same feeling was the reason that, although I wrote the outline for The Chronicles of Firma when I was only twenty, I wasn't yet ready to actually write them. I didn't yet have the patience or self-discipline to tackle even a whole novel, let alone a trilogy.
If I were you, I'd consider writing some short stories with your characters, or maybe a novella - something shorter to start out with. That way you can just write about the stuff that interests you right now. With more time, practice and life experience, you'll eventually work your way up to where you feel comfortable tackling an entire novel. Then, if it's outlined and fleshed out properly, you shouldn't have that urge to "skip to the good parts" anymore because it will all be good.
I don't want to discourage you. I just think you may be taking a little bit too big a bite right now. Trust me, if you already find parts of your novel too boring to write, your readers will certainly find them too boring to read.
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