
The blade
pushing
down
penetrating
skin
asking
fast
questioning life
why
deeper
its thrusted
no longer
questioning
blood
now flowing
life
dispering
emotions
almoust
dying
why
no longer
pain
no longer
and then...
blood
no
longer
thoughts flowing
question
asking
life
now
showing
for
after all
it
was
just
momentary happiness
Comments
comments would be much
comments would be much aprecciated
nothing iz real
john lennon
Wow. That is awesome. Ionno
Wow. That is awesome. Ionno if you could tell, but I'm kinda in a "blood is so awesome I almost want to bleed to death" mood...XDD Good poem though, I like it. It's about cutting, right?
~Randi
nothing iz real john
nothing iz real
john lennon
yep it is , Im glad you liked :)