I wander,
A broken sculpture,
Shattered and shaking.
I weap,
A weary soul,
Heavy and aching.
Days are nothing.
Nights are everything.
Nothing is fitfull dreaming and numb repitition.
Everything is torment and pain.
Wandering, weaping,
I cease to be.
My will has been broken,
I can not be freed...
***note! this doesn't neccessarily apply to my life, but rather my feelings
on the state of today's society.***
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Wow i really liked this. I
Wow i really liked this. Its really good.
She said live young and leave a wake of beauty,
it's all I ever could have asked
should have asked from you,
and I wont forget to write you
when I get there soon
cause you'll be lying dead from dreaming (nightmares)
Very
Very nicely written! Um though one little thing i would change is a little grammar mistake (sorry i'm anal like that) so yeah "can not" should be one word. But I love the poem!!! Very much!!!!
"Persuasive speech, and more persuasive sighs,
Silence that spoke, and eloquence of eyes."
- The Iliad (bk. XX, l. 315), (Bryant's translation)