Ch.4+5 of my imagination

ForeverEndedToday's picture

Chapters 4+5. Thanks for reading! Still no luck with the title I seem to have a block on it. Comments are appreciated :)

Chapter 4: Jess

I sat down on the dirty bathroom floor listening to Jamie as she explained what happened.

“I’m gonna kill her.

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wild-blue-yonder's picture

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I can't tell if I'm gonna cry first or try to bash their heads together. it's the whole Romeo and Juliet thing isn't it! Er... Rometta and Juliet? Oh, I'm tired... but if you were going for emotion-evoking tragic irony there it worked on me.

You are going to make them realize right? Later on, they'll get together without stabbing themselves first???