What do you want me to be?
I try so hard but it is never enough
You criticize me for all that I do
What is it you want from me?
You just can see
The pain inside of me
My soul cries for deliverance
My body cries for death
I am insane
I have nothing left
You took everything from me
I cannot bear the weight
The weight of this suffering
When will it end?
When will it end?
I try everyday
I try to make through
I cannot hold on
Not any longer
Is this what you wanted from me?
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That's nice. Sounds like some
That's nice. Sounds like something that someone reads in a school assembly to get a point through about non-acceptance.
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"For the ladies and the fags yeah. We're the band with the rollerskate jams!"
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it really incaptures the read
it really incaptures the reader into what your fealing and you get your point across like bam. and its also very very agressive but in a good way like this is what im saying listen to me know god damnit lol.
sendin pce
nicky
Wow
This is a great peom, rock on man!! I really liked the unsuaul rhyme scheme and, of course, the great message you're trying to get across...
VIVA LA VIE BOHEME!!