That One Word

devildog's picture

NOTE TO SETH FROM ALEX

First of all, Seth, let me say that I love you. Don’t worry, I know how much you hate it when I say that (which is why I do; you do know me, don’t you?). And I know you’ll hate me even more when you see this, but I have to tell it—I can’t keep everything inside me anymore with the tale running cold in my veins. You don’t want me to, I know (despite all my reassurances that no one cares), but it’s really not your say.

So, pardon me from being blunt and cruel, but this is for your own good. And mine, hopefully.

Seth sat on the dull metal bleachers, his trigonometry book open on his lap, his brows furrowed as his eyes tried to suck the equations into his brain. Not that it worked. The sun beat down upon his blonde hair and pale neck, making him feel like his head was overheating from the strain. Sighing, he snapped the book shut and pulled a pen from behind his ear, sucking contemplatively on the point.

It was always at this time that Alex found him, much to Seth’s annoyance.

“If that pen explodes, I’m going to laugh my ass off.

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Inkblot's picture

Awesome!

Pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You got talent dude.

devildog's picture

Thank you!!*hugs* I shall

Thank you!!*hugs*

I shall definetely write more, just for you:). LOL

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Always forgive your enemies; nothing annoys them so much.
Oscar Wilde

Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live.
Oscar Wilde

Heh...'s picture

O.O awsome!

OOOOO i liked that alot ^^ please write more!!

I want a hug :(

devildog's picture

Aw, thank you! I had fun writ

Aw, thank you! I had fun writing it; *snickers* I am so like Alex. It seems my role in life is to embarass people:).

~*~*~*~*~*~

Always forgive your enemies; nothing annoys them so much.
Oscar Wilde

Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live.
Oscar Wilde

Uncertain's picture

Wow

Wow, this is great... I'm looking forward to part two. =]

> > "I'd rather have the heterosexual society changed than my homosexual child change" - Annonymous

devildog's picture

Thank you! *hugs* There sh

Thank you! *hugs*

There shall be more! *evil laugh*

~*~*~*~*~*~

Always forgive your enemies; nothing annoys them so much.
Oscar Wilde

Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live.
Oscar Wilde

analyticallyinclined's picture

Nice

I don't normally tend to go for short stories like this, but I must say I really found this story intersting and am dissapointed that I have to wait for its continuation.
Must admit though, you need to email me when you get it here, cause I want to read it!

Its the little things that make the big things.

devildog's picture

Thanks very much! The fif

Thanks very much!

The fifth part may not come till the weekend, I think-I have to work on my screenplay for screenwriting class. It's sucking up all my creative energy! Not to mention it's much more fun than doing my chemistry homework:P.

LOL, I'm happy you liked it-I'll e-mail you when it's done;)

~*~*~*~*~*~

Always forgive your enemies; nothing annoys them so much.
Oscar Wilde

Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live.
Oscar Wilde

the mouse that roared's picture

:)

I really like this. The writing is smooth and the characters are distinct and well-drawn. Good job!

Are you hanging on to something useless just because you think it's beautiful?
--William Zinsser

devildog's picture

Thanks! I'm sad I've had to p

Thanks! I'm sad I've had to put it on haitus for the moment-so many other writing projects have taken away my time:(

~*~*~*~*~*~

Always forgive your enemies; nothing annoys them so much.
Oscar Wilde

Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live.
Oscar Wilde