okay okay chapter 5. i hope ya'll like it

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Chapter 5

The first one she met was Harold benjamin senior but, he was known as “pop

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unknowndestiny's picture

THANK YOU!

YESSS!! You kept writing - THANK YOU!! I really love how you incorporated your old story into the new one by making joanna devyn's sister - really good idea. Also, I have to say that I like the conflict - bringing Daniel into the story - it explains a lot about why joanna has been acting the way she has. So please keep writitng -
it's getting really really good.

yep_im_a_stalker's picture

THANK YOU!!!

thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!

thats really cool about joanna's sister cuz it reminds me of me and my sister.

keep up the good work!

*Love is blind to everything you throw in its path-Race, gender, religious beliefs, and social class are just minor annoyances.*

shattered dreams's picture

thanks

i do like it, and it was very interesting to know that devyn is joannas sister. thanks for continuing the story, although the ending is kinda sad. but very well written. :)