chapter 6 carianne you better comment!!!!

w8tin4life's picture

Chapter 6

Joanna kept running. Faster and faster. She had to keep running. Her lungs burned from the lack of oxygen. Acres on acres went and past until she could see the edge of the woods where pop had told her Stephanie had been over five hours ago. She thought she would give Stephanie time to breathe but five hours! She picked up her pace praying to god nothing had happened. Her feelings and thoughts were mumbled and the only thing yelling in her head was the thought of getting to her. Daniel’s face flashed in Joanna’s mind and she closed her eyes for a second wishing she could stop Stephanie’s reaction she had seen. She had the wrong idea with Daniel. When she reached the woods she jogged through the trees and saw Stephanie sitting peacefully on the ground.
“Jesus Christ, are you okay?

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saweeeetttt's picture

I love it Ashley. I love ever

I love it Ashley. I love everything about this story. You're such a good writer babe. I can't wait till you post the next one ; ) Everyone's going to love it. I love you so much

lotus1's picture

this story is really good...h

this story is really good...how did you learn to write like that?

w8tin4life's picture

i just do!! beats me Who w

i just do!! beats me

Who would give a law to lovers? Love is unto itself a higher law. ~Boethius, The Consolation of Philosophy, A.D. 524

yep_im_a_stalker's picture

:thumbs up:

most excellent--im glad you kept writing the story

*Love is blind to everything you throw in its path-Race, gender, religious beliefs, and social class are just minor annoyances.*

shattered dreams's picture

i love it!

im glad they finally got together! once again excellent writing! thanks, cant wait til the next one.