For Dakota

Patch's picture

Let me save you
Like you saved me

You ended my torture
Eased my darkness
Brought forth my inner light.
You taught me to love.

Come my night and day
I'll carry you so far away
From this world of tears and pain.
We'll find comfort in the gentle breeze
Discover calm in the warming light of the sun.

Let me save you
Like you saved me

You showed me my worth
Brightened my days
Helped me to reaffirm myself.
You taught me to live.

Come my day and night
Let us romance in the clouds.
May we play in the night's silence
And fill the stillness with our laughter.
We'll shock the stars with our luminescense.

Come my night and day
Let me save you
Like you saved me.

Comments

Lost Angry Youth's picture

that was pretty gay (:

that was pretty gay
(:

Patch's picture

Glad you liked it! :) "Wh

Glad you liked it! :)

"What is the purpose of life? It is to create our own purpose."

Dakota's picture

That was the most beautiful p

That was the most beautiful poem I have ever read! I love it!

How can we accuratly describe our feelings in words?
We can't

raining men's picture

Ah

Ah, so you guys are together after all.
I'm glad for you

"Fear leads to anger, anger leads to hate, hate leads to suf-fer-ing"

rowie's picture

you know youve got something

you know youve got something pretty special with dakota when you can write that beautifullt about it.

--how can you smile with all those tears in your eyes?--

**you must be the change you wish to see in the world**