Sick of w8tin for stories, so I started one

armadillo's picture
There she was, staring at the unrelenting mouth of her college professor; trying hard not to look bored. I didn’t have the same determination, as I had casually browsed the classroom with my plain, brown eyes, only to have them fall on her again. It was only the second day of class and I had not yet met her, but somehow, I fell into the habit of watching her often. Her hair was brown, her eyes were too, but she was no where near plain. She had one of those classy, silver-screen actress looks, like Audrey Hepburn, but hotter, in a way I'd never seen before. Suddenly, the unexpected happened…She caught my stare and smiled. I got nervous and looked away, only to hear my name called loudly, as though my mother was reminding me to do forgotten chores. “Gertrude McKinley! That is your name, no?

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unknowndestiny's picture

Hey, I really like your story

Hey, I really like your story - please keep writing

saweeeetttt's picture

I like it alot, keep going

I like it alot, keep going

w8tin4life's picture

im so jelous better than mine

im so jelous better than mine will ever be

Who would give a law to lovers? Love is unto itself a higher law. ~Boethius, The Consolation of Philosophy, A.D. 524

armadillo's picture

shhhhhh......no it's not!

Come on, Devyn's character description rocks! Like, I still have a crush on that ficticious, under-aged, beauty!

Y - GuRl's picture

good start

Your story is cool, more please!

[This world's an ugly place.. but you're so beautiful to me]