My Final farewell to Ben

Patch's picture

Just a note -- This is an old poem I wrote about the time I sent a letter to a guy at school, telling him I had feelings for him, and mainly about the call I made to make sure he had gotten it. If y'all want more background, just say so in a post and I'll tell you the whole sob story.

I called you Friday night
To ask if you had received
My death-to-sender letter.
Your mom answered the phone
(Or it may have been some random aunt)
Dishing out the standard “Hello

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etherealmonster's picture

I like it. Especially sinc

I like it.

Especially since I, too, once had a Ben

Anonymous's picture

I like this poem a lot. It m

I like this poem a lot. It makes me sad.

** IMRU? **

Sirens call's picture

:'(

Oh, it's really sad...but great too!! I'm glad that you were able to move on *smile*. That was a really brave thing you did, giving Ben that letter...

~Morgasm~