chapter 9

w8tin4life's picture

long awaited ive been busy hope you like it!!

Chapter 9: life has changed

Hope had tried to avoid Devyn all week. Hope had heard that Devyn was looking for her. Hope didn’t want to fall into something that she couldn’t get out of. Her feelings for Devyn wouldn’t last she told herself. Besides, Jackson Mills was dating Devyn. One week till Christmas break; one week till the temptation was over for a good month. Hope rounded a corner and saw Devyn standing at her locker. Her hands were on the top of the row of lockers and her head was bent between her strong arms. Hope could see the muscles in Devyns arm contract and relax. Devyn’s jaw was clenched shut. Her mouth made a thin line. Hope saw people swerve around Devyn. They seemed afraid of her. Hope thought about this to herself. Devyn, seen there at her locker, did seem menacing, but hope had never been scared of Devyn. Ever since Devyn hugged her that day in the hall, she had known that Devyn wasn’t capable of hurting anyone. Hope walked quickly and touched Devyn’s shoulder and she felt Devyns muscle tense up. Devyn quietly shut her locker door. She turned and looked down into hope’s eyes.
“Why?

Comments

armadillo's picture

nice come back

Hey, your grammar is really improving as well, I hope that's not why it took you so long ;) I was growing impatient, but it's an exciting story.

unknowndestiny's picture

Amazing

I've read all of the previous chapters and I have to say that you're a great writer - you have me completely hooked. Please write more quickly!

taste the rainbow's picture

Yay!

keep writing, hopefully you can find the time to post soon!

"What they don't know can't hurt them

but it sure as hell can hurt me"

FlameFish08's picture

you definitely got my approval;)