chapter 5 and 6

w8tin4life's picture

Chapter 5: shirtless

Hope sat on the old, crummy couch surfing the T.V.
“Hope; phone

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PROBLEM_CHILD's picture

awesome

thatz awesome i can't wait til the next one.

I want to cry but my pride won't let me.

FlameFish08's picture

ugh

man, u just got to leave it hangin dont u? of course u do. well i really liked the part when devyn is holding hope, it was great moment. i cant wait to find out what happened with hope!!

armadillo's picture

Damn! That was great!

You're really doing a fine job! However, hope is the character's name and to hop on one foot in past tense is hopped, not hoped. hehe

greta's picture

thanks

well now i'm hooked! one more addiction!WOO HOOOOO!