Requiem For A Broken Heart

Dressed Up For Dying's picture

She slowly awakened. I watched her eyes softly part. Those eyes had once gazed into my own whilst overflowing with a tender passion. Those eyes flitted round, searching, eventually settling on me. There was no adulation in her gaze now, her eyes were full of terror.
“Lily?

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brand_new05's picture

wOwzers

Hey dressed up for dying,
that was a GREAT story. I was so caught up by it i didnt even notice that it was the end. i love the way your words flow into each other and ur descriptions.

PLEASE write more...share ur talented writing for those who cant write a single thing ^_^

peace
"Taking your own life with boredom,
I'm taking my own life with wine -
it helps you to rule out the sorrow,
it helps me to empty my mind
Making the most of a bad time
I'm smoking the brains from my head"

morbid intentions 666's picture

i usually dont congradulate writers but....

that was the F***king $h!+ !!!!!!!! 0.0 u hav a be-uuuu-tiful gothic mind ^-^ i love how u make it so twisted & unpredictable
plz write more *puppy eyes* @.@
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"keep ur thorns,cuz m running away" -Mudvayne
"A powerful festering energy roots itself in this land and carves a crest of blood"bcuz humans r so very simple" -fullmetal alchemist(lust)