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Chain Link (A Poem)

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8 March, 2004 - 2:16am — ACCgirl

“It’s cold as hell out here,

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8 March, 2004 - 2:29am — crookedsmile
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Pretty cool

I like this.
It's kinda weird.
Which is good.
I especially like the closet reference thing.
Very nice.

8 March, 2004 - 4:31am — niks121997
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I agree

I agree with you. It's good. :)

"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream."

8 March, 2004 - 8:19am — stars and nothing
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wow

Good, sad, pretty, strange, evocative.
Favorite line: "Wind visible in the uneasy sand."
Sometimes I read things and wish I'd thought to say it like that.
very beautiful poem, i like that it flows like a conversation.
love emily